Text colour peer feedback


Morgan's feedback (another student):
Morgan said that she liked the blue font at the bottom of the first idea because it stood out more. she said she liked the light red for the 'including singles such as ...' section of text as it was easier to read than the yellow and looked more aesthetically pleasing than the yellow. She said that she liked the third positioning of the text best out of all of the ideas as it looked less cramped.

Claudia's feedback (another student):
Claudia said that she liked the placing of the yellow text on the first and second design above but with the light red in the third design as a colour. She also said she liked the dark red in the second and third design but thought that it wasn't as noticeable as the blue for the 'album out now text'. She said that she thought it would be better if the blue was darker as it was a bit too bright and looked a bit out of place and that maybe I should use the blue from the window or the car to make it fit in with the poster more. She talked about maybe changing the text placement on the poster.

Mrs Dixon's feedback (teacher):
Mrs Dixon said that maybe the yellow needed to change to a darker colour and that needed to change positions as it looked good but it was too cramped and needed to be re-arranged. She said all the red font pushed the hands back and that they didn't jump out at you as much because there was other red in the image, because of this she liked the first one best even though she thought that it needed to change.

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